new one in the worx metal

[JERICHO]

I'll let you know now, I know there a few spots that needs some guitar rework, but i got ahead of myself from the idea of what it could sound like. I will fix them and also some vox re work(and anything else that you all might have for me) but like i said i rushed this one cuz i got excited... not very happy with the chorus parts either. I just cant seem to get that right yet. Maybe some pointers or downright dirty criticism may help so have a listen.
http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=20599

 

[zero00]

Hi, the vox is too low, i barely hear it.
You could try using a little less distortion on the guitar for a little cleaner sound, but that is just a taste thing.
The bass is too buried and undefined, i can't get was is doing, check frequencies and volume.
The drums are well balanced, not my favorite overall sound, but it's ok.

Regards.

 

[STAT1STICK]

Vocals are way too quiet and the overall mix is in need of some low end and maybe some more mids, too. The song seems like it needs something... Maybe some beefier synths.