New Beat: Throw-A-Chair (please critique)

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Throw-A-Chair - Im taking yall to the ATL with this one. Dark/crunk track. This can easily get someone hurt.

Please critique/drop some feedback on this beat. Thanx.
 
Nice track. Feelin' it. This'd be perfect for a diss. The only thing I'm having a problem with is the hook: where is it? Is it where take away a diffierent instrument each time? If so it needs to be for longer and have some sort of dominant catching tune that comes on so it's really obvious of what it is.

Feelin' it.
 
Thanx a lot for the feedback, I appreciate it. The hook is where the scratches are. The beat starts with the hook.


Thanx
 
LEARNING EARS HERE

HEY LISTENED TO YOUR BEAT FROM WHAT I HEARD IT CAN BE A TIGHT ASS CUT I MEAN ITS GOOD NOW, BUT IT HAS POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT BEAT ITS NICE HARD; CAN DEFINATLY START TO GET A VIBE ON IT. NEW TO THE GAME
LDYLEE
 
Thanx for checking it out...haha, I dont rap so I cant lay vocals on them myself, but hopefuly a tight MC rips it or something. Thanx again yall.
 
Re: LEARNING EARS HERE

LDYLEE said:
HEY LISTENED TO YOUR BEAT FROM WHAT I HEARD IT CAN BE A TIGHT ASS CUT I MEAN ITS GOOD NOW, BUT IT HAS POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT BEAT ITS NICE HARD; CAN DEFINATLY START TO GET A VIBE ON IT. NEW TO THE GAME
LDYLEE
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LDYLEE,
I know ur not notorious for this, but I'll tell you know before it becomes an annoying habbit (I used to do it, that's the only way I know:)) - you might not want to type in caps all the time: it looks like ur shouting + it's hard to read:(

Oh, and I'll double what CyanJaguar said about laying some vocals - I hope you find the right MC.
 
yes i know lol

hey yes after i posted i realized it was in all caps but i had posted it so it was to late to correct. but thanks for the tip, no in the habit of yelling so it was my fck up sorry baout that people , my bad.:D
will make sure i always remember to take the cap lock off:eek: just an oversight on my part:D :D :D :D
sorry
Ldy:cool:
 
I was wondering when we'd see a track like this... I like how cats mix it up around here. Being a down south cat... I'm digging it. All you need is the catchy phrase and a couple extra hyper cats that actually have some real skills with saying shit that gets blood pumpin.

One thing though... A big change up Where the beat just flips and a cat rips it's ass. That'll set it off the scales and take it out the usual crunk track mold.

Nice one MISTA ALT.


Thinking about it------>Grabs a chair----------> HIT'S THE LAPTOP! BLOWW!!!......... YEAHHHHHH!!!!........:(
 
LOL..Thanx for the feedback, I really appreciate it. Its hard finding the right MC in a place where 98% of the people 30 and under are trying to rap and 90% are garbage. Hopefully the right MC finds me.
 
I've noticed that.

A rapper seems to be either shit or brillliant.
 
Mista,

Nice job on this track, especially the drum line. This has got that definitive Southern bounce feel to it, but with a more aggressive vibe, which is cool because I can't think of another track that sounds similar. Mix is done well.

Overall good work, but stand out work on the drums IMHO.

Stray
 
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