Ohio, huh? Gotta love it!
Heard your beats... Diggin the chill feel... Might need a lil more audible separation between verse and chorus...Maybe add some smooth-type drum dramatics at the last bar of each segment to get some suspense going before you drop the chorus/verse (well visa versa)...
Though I'm not going to claim an expert status, listen to the beat on my page (below) called "My City" for my attempt at such suspense...
From what I can tell on these crappy work speakers, the clarity is pristine! Hats may be a lil loud on a couple though....
Good stuff man!
