New Ambient Track by 14 years old music artist Underground Surface

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Firstly, your age means nothing. You don't need to put that you are 14 yrs old. No one cares.

As for the tune, I thought it had promise but it goes nowhere. I lost interest and skipped through it. It'd make a good intro for a techno/trance track but I found it long and dull. I think it would benefit from a re-working. Add a good beat and tear it up. Get some bass pumping. Shorten what you have to an intro, break, outro and get some flavour in there.

My very humble opinion.

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I agree with Mr Clean .. it would be a very nice intro for a trance tune :)
 
Listening to it for what it is, an ambient track; it is well executed and clean. It would serve fairly well as it sits in support of something else; like being the underscore in a narrated short film; but by itself, it lacks a strong enough melodic element. The textures presented, while harmonious and well blended, are also a little bit bland, even for ambient; they don't quite sustain the piece enough on their own. I'm not certain you need to rework it into an entirely difference genre; but you might want to consider a more sustainable melodic element to give it the rigidity to support itself. The mix is fine, the sound field is well represented everywhere; nothing stands out as harsh, you have a nice and creamy blend; but that only takes you so far. Commendable work to this point; but I think it has the potential to move to the next level if you keep working with it.
 
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