Listening to it for what it is, an ambient track; it is well executed and clean. It would serve fairly well as it sits in support of something else; like being the underscore in a narrated short film; but by itself, it lacks a strong enough melodic element. The textures presented, while harmonious and well blended, are also a little bit bland, even for ambient; they don't quite sustain the piece enough on their own. I'm not certain you need to rework it into an entirely difference genre; but you might want to consider a more sustainable melodic element to give it the rigidity to support itself. The mix is fine, the sound field is well represented everywhere; nothing stands out as harsh, you have a nice and creamy blend; but that only takes you so far. Commendable work to this point; but I think it has the potential to move to the next level if you keep working with it.
