I download and listened to "In My Head". er,uh,what the... WOW! A major difference in overall presentation and sonic quality.
Thanks!
I was going to post in my original message to you that you may want to try to write more for the masses then just for yourself.
That can be very, very true... My Music is strictly a hobby, and I love doing it, and I actually DO listen to the songs I record... Why?, cause I like them..
Don't confuse what I said about me liking to sing as not fuffilling the masses needs.... All im saying is, I love singing, and even if im not awesome, I would never hire someone to take the vocals away from me.. But, at the same time I do keep in mind that people have to like the music in order to purchase it. I usually infuse that part in the songwriting.
Also, I was expecting a really nice guitar solo, the synth solo, while nice, just didn't jump out at me. The song really made it seem like a guitar solo or perhaps a more meaty synth solo was coming. One last comment, remember with a pop/rock song you need to catch the listener pretty quick. I really wasn't that "into" the song in that first intro verse. If I was radio surfing I would have had plenty of time to change the channel. I would consider going 4 bars like it is, 4 bars rocked out before going into the first chorus. You would still have that dramatic change but it would just come sooner in the song, hence, pulling the listener in!
Funny, you should mention that..The keyboard solo has been taken out, and replaced... That mix on my website is pretty old..
I guess the intro is a matter of taste... I have had people tell me they love the build up, and then the song "explodes" at the chorus.... I will keep it, but I totally understand where your coming from.
Thanks for listening X....