Needing feedback

[noahrex]

I'm kinda stuck. I've been working on this tune and it's still in rough draft form. I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions regarding the mixing, lyrics, and/or music. There are two songs on the page...but i'm more concerned about "One More Minute". If you want to send feedback on Sunshine too....feel free...i'd love it. Thanks

MY MUSIC PAGE

 

[danny.guitar]

Try the MP3 mixing clinic forum...

Also, I listened to "One More Minute" and to be honest I don't like the vocals that much at all.

The mix sounds okay I guess, but I had to listen at low volumes because I didn't want anyone else in my house to hear what I was listening to.

Not trying to be mean, just giving you my honest opinion.

 

[noahrex]

seriously...i'm glad you were honest. what was it about the vocals that you did not like....the lyrics, the effects, or the tones? any other suggestions?

 

[superspit]

seriously...i'm glad you were honest. what was it about the vocals that you did not like....the lyrics, the effects, or the tones? any other suggestions?

Hi Noah,
thanx for the opportunity to listen to your music.
Ok....I love the music/instrumentals...well mixed and produced. Nice old synth sounds too, right up my alley!!
Ok..the vox....you have a certain quality that would work with many other genres of music, just, i believe, not this particular one.
I envisage your vox as one for a Nirvana type style,...please take this as a compliment, not the other way around.
I noticed on the site that you do everything on this mix....well done!! Good job!
PS...have some cool rep, on me!!
Kindest Regards,
Superspit.

 

[superspit]

PS...

oh yeah....I 5ucking love from 2 min 25 seconds till end...
Man, that synth /sequenced sound is sooo cool!
Again.,Well done!
I've always been fond of Jean M Jarre's sound!!
SSpit

 

[noahrex]

i know what you mean about the vocals not fitting. I'm in my early stages of recording, this is literally the 4th song i've recorded, so hopefully i'll learn how to manipulate my voice better. Do you have any suggestions on how to make the song better? Did you get a chance to listen to "Sunshine"? Thanks for taking the time to check it out and write a response, i appreciate it a lot.