need your musical ears..

[n4eem]

hi there, ive produced this world ethnical 2step song, you wouldnt understand the lyrics, but all i want you to listen to is the overall:

music compostion

layout of song

quality of the music

thankyou,

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=565759

 

[NYMorningstar]

It all sounds like you recorded this in a casio keyboard which sounds pretty cheesy. Since you limited the options I'd say this is a don't give up your day job mix.

 

[RAMI]

I can't play it. It says "Error on page". I'll try again later, I might have to re-start my comfuser.

 

[J.C. Scott]

Overall, it sounds fairly well mixed, however the low end seems to be lacking for this type of music.

 

[tubesrawsom]

nice mix but its not full enough it needs more juice.

 

[rayc]

Yeah, sub bass is missing early on - it needs it to give the feel.
Apart from that it's genre reaffirming though not redefining.
The robo girl rap isn't robo enough - redo that & actually sample the single words & play then from the keys - that'll give it a more realistic robo speak break up.