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stringtheory
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Hi everyone,
Trying to write a song for my Nephew and i'm having some problems with the outro verse. would like to get some advice...
I'm fairly happy with the first 2 and a half minutes of the song but i'd like to get your thoughts on the chances of working in the outro somehow...
I'm not sure if it's just me, but I'm not sure the outro fits... is it just me? do you think it could be worked in somehow? if so, i would love it if you could share your ideas! Or, tell me to bag it!
Disclaimer... the outro isn't mixed into the song at all, i'm just playing around with working it into the song.
thanks!
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8324580
Trying to write a song for my Nephew and i'm having some problems with the outro verse. would like to get some advice...
I'm fairly happy with the first 2 and a half minutes of the song but i'd like to get your thoughts on the chances of working in the outro somehow...
I'm not sure if it's just me, but I'm not sure the outro fits... is it just me? do you think it could be worked in somehow? if so, i would love it if you could share your ideas! Or, tell me to bag it!
Disclaimer... the outro isn't mixed into the song at all, i'm just playing around with working it into the song.
thanks!
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8324580
