Need Critisism On New Song as Single!

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Hey ya'll, wats going on, Happy New Year !!

But to business, i got a new song for my groups album that i want to use as our first single, its a club song and a definite radio banger! (i been working making new music everyday for the past week thats my new years resolution!)

Now because of restraints on time all i could accomplish without the guys was the remix version so i called up some friends of mine to light a fire to this bad boy and we were done within an hour of making the beat and coming up with the song idea!

This is what i need
1. Is this a single worthy to be a single and should me and mine put our whole behind this record or should we ditch this bad boy
2. Don't judge on mixing, this is a rough mix by every sence of the word, only volume adjusting here but i will mix further at a later date
3. Are the MC's on point (i think so but i want your opinion as it does mean alot to me)

thanks ya'll, i really wanna make this one work, we are all prepared to go all the way with this as a single and are gonna get this all pressed and edited for radio and the like. I just like the fact that i can come to ya'll and get an honest opinion on my music cause im one of the few that can take critisism.

P.S.- I did record this in my studio if anyone was wondering, and yes the beat was made with no sampling involved what so ever

thanks ya'll!

Killa Kingz- Drop To The Floor (remix)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3285986&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3285986&q=hi

1st verse- $tree$ from deadley Vision
2nd verse- K.O. from Down Low Productions
3rd verse- Soul B. from Down Low Productions
 
Track is nice, I could see it being a single. Honestly, it would be a nice track, but It's not a huge HIT to me, it has the potential but that being said, it's not really that creative of a song, it fits the mold of what was going on in 05 pretty well though. The screwed hook, it has a mix of east with south as far as the rappers go, they spit pretty str8, but I didn't really soak in any lines they said b/c they all sounded like what I hear 24/7. Overall, I'd give it a B. With the right mix/master it could be better.

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https://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=182923
 
ok...

thanks for the comments on the points i asked for.

and yeah i will definitely take to heart what you said about the song, i will concentrate even harder on making the regular version that much better!

thanks man!
 
Decent song overall. I agree, could definatly be a radio hit. Only thing that i could comment negatively is the 2nd emcee was rushing a few end rhymes(ex. southern hospiTALITY, we about that a$s). Besides that, pretty solid track.
 
Yeah! lol!

I know we are going to fix those up today, its funny that you noticed that cause i told him that and now he can't stand hearing it messed up.

Good Ears!
 
Hey!

Anybody else want to put in there 2cents!

Ya'll know im good for it!
 
It is a good song overall, but with so many rappers out there today, I don't see how you are any different. When you are different, you turn heads. But overall, you guys are talented. Good Job
 
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