the mutli-image: mixer/recorder, desk set-up, drum.
the image as a whole for the drums is light. Like it was copied by a crappy scanner. And I don't think drums are what I think of when I think of a studio, I'd stick to the neat 'rack, and console' images. And leave the musical instruments- drums, guitars, keys, etc... to the equipment pages and what not. And I'd use a "blur" effect on the trim of that image so it meshes with the page better. Like it kind of sinks into it or is rising from it.
"If your looking for the best deal, you've come to the right place."
It's "you're" as in "you are" "if you are looking..."
your is a possession, you own it. It's YOUR studio equipment, etc.
"many other musical gene Projects and can "
you mean't genre, and projects should be all lower case.
" and We're the only studio in our area that offers preminum extras such as Digi Paks(c), Full color Cd printing,"
"we're" should be all lower case. And if you're going to capitalize any part of the abbreviation CD. It should be both the C and the D. I noticed other mentions of "CD" where it's all lower case.. Keep it common, make it all uniform.
also, for the links. Rid them of the purple underline. Personally I'd rid ALL links of underlines. But at least change that purple underline. It doesn't fit at all, and it's almost so dark on the black it truly might as well not be there.
and change the title of the page from:
"Phat man index"
to say:
"
Phatman Studios"
or
"Phatman Studios - Enter our world"
since every other mention of the studio name on your site is layed out as: "Phatman" and not "Phat man"
But the page is looking much better, keep it up!