My quality?

[mossburn]

Could someone listen to my track, and tell me whats wrong with my quality???

I know its not good, i record on the yamaha aw16g...

www.myspace.com/mossburn1

its rap, could someone tell what can i do to improve my quality??

thankyou..

 

[chessrock]

could someone tell what can i do to improve my quality??

Use better technique and better equipment. Record in a better space, and learn to mix better.

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[Golden]

Another thing to keep in mind is that there will always be room for "improvement". Regardless of your stage of the game... Nonetheless, keep at it... Do your best...

 

[Nick_Black]

I say the vox is high enough quality, but the beat seams a bit on the low side.
you also need too work on your mixing skillz quite a bit (no worries... so do I )
btw, is that beat an mp3 or did you record/make it yourself?

 

[Cult_Status02]

Use better technique and better equipment. Record in a better space, and learn to mix better.

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I second that. More specifically, I think a nice mic and better convertor would go a long way with you.