My Latest, Need A Little Input

  • Thread starter Thread starter powderfinger
  • Start date Start date
hey yer link is bad...i tried to listen to the remix and it doesnt work..???


jamal
 
did u add more guitar??....vocals sound waaaaayyy better i knew u could do it........maybe the guitar is just panned diff??.....naa..theres more here now..right???...lol..
BIG HUGE DIFFERENCE IN THE VOCALS....:D
guitar tone sounds better fuller...
man this sounds about 4000 times better than the first mix...

this is what its about right?..moving forward!!!!


are you done with this or still workin on it??..



cool man
jamal
 
jamal,
thanks for listening again.....i'm glad the vocals sound better.....yeah, i'm probably done for the moment........i'm really just trying to find a standard way to do some of my acoustic stuff for a disc i'm trying to do.......everytime i do a song i improve towards the sound i'm looking for, but i'm still not 100% there.....still searching, but i'll probably just try new techniques on a new song rather than beat the hell out of this one
 
listening to the 2nd mix.. haven't read any comments..

good acoustic tune man.. I would slap solos all over this bitch, or beef up that acoustic sound a bit.. they sound good, but since it's just them, maybe some fatness/tightness is in order.. sounded a little loose at times, but cool overall..
 
thanks for listening sabbath.....yeah, i'm think about giving it full band treatment.....and if i do, i'll surly add some solos
 
didn't listen to the first but the second is pretty nice. the rythm guitar is strong. it's right in the pocket and the singing is 98%. There are still a few small vocal repairs to make but they are only noticeable because your voice is so up front in this. hard to avoid given the arrangement and i guess that's the point. but i really like vocals that way. right up front, in your face. so thanks for that.

the second guitar was a little distracting. maybe it could be a little sparser and just punctuate certain phrases? i don't know, it just didn't seem to add a lot and kind of got in the way. it was definitely not played in the pocket like the rythm guitar.

i'm only being picky, cause that's why you post here, isn't it?

anyway, i like this much. and i appreciate the open arrangement allowing the listener to hear you authentically and not a bunch of loops and midi sequences that you put together.....like me!
 
Nice song. I liked the guitar part. Decent melody too. I like the section that almost sounds like you're screwing up the guitar (weird chord), but then keep playing.

I thought I heard a spot to two where the vocal is slightly off on pitch. It sounded to me like both the vocals and guitar were a little strong on the midrange. The harmony seems pushed back a little too far - it's somewhat difficult to hear. There are also plenty of additional spots for harmonies, which I think would make for an improved song.
 
Hey there Powderfinger,

I tried listening on hi fi but could only get a bit of it, so I had to resort to lo fi. Anyway I like the acoustic sound. What are you using?

I think the song would benefit from drums playing a nice groove. Just leave it quite acoustic though. It would make the whole song sit nicely.

Otherwise nice song and nice recording. It's just crying for something more in the instruments.

Cheers,

PJH
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top