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lasagne
I fancy Fancy
KC is gonna love it
FunkDaddy
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Needs a stronger backbeat imo.
Gets pretty boring too, you seem to rely on a lot of the same "riffs" (which aren't all that inventive to begin with) and just change the sound slightly.
Gets pretty boring too, you seem to rely on a lot of the same "riffs" (which aren't all that inventive to begin with) and just change the sound slightly.
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Lakiscy
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Hello, thanks for feedback. Can you be more specific, what you mean by "stronger backbeat", use louder kicks for example?
What you mean "riffs". sorry i dont understand these terms.
VomitHatSteve
Hat STYLE. Not contents.
I think "hooks" would be a more applicable term than "riffs" in this case.
I watched about half of the YouTube one before I got bored and stopped it.
As background techno, I think it works.
As club music, as FD said, it needs a better beat. That would mean that the drums need to be driving the music more. They don't need to be louder, but they do need to make people want to get up and dance.
As a promotional video for that... fashion show? club? casino? I couldn't figure it out, honestly. It's too long. You're going to lose people's attention after a minute unless you give them more than "dancing! decorations! dames!*"
*Sorry. I couldn't resist the alliteration!
I watched about half of the YouTube one before I got bored and stopped it.
As background techno, I think it works.
As club music, as FD said, it needs a better beat. That would mean that the drums need to be driving the music more. They don't need to be louder, but they do need to make people want to get up and dance.
As a promotional video for that... fashion show? club? casino? I couldn't figure it out, honestly. It's too long. You're going to lose people's attention after a minute unless you give them more than "dancing! decorations! dames!*"
*Sorry. I couldn't resist the alliteration!
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Lakiscy
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OK now i think i understand. Im not a dj so i miss a lot of these up/down changes in the song. The beat a simple and straight all the time. Thats because i was fail to make a good beat and try take attention from the other instruments, but of course this is wrong cause dance music its all about the beat.
That is my first song and i made every sound by my own using reason, maybe im not so pro for that after all and i should have use more ready loops and pre-set sounds created by professionals.
So what i understand is that
- I have to give more attention to the beat and make it more interesting
- Make better bridges and changes inside the song so i will prepare the dancer about what is going to come for him to dance
- some vocals in the piano session might make the song more interesting
- and of course my mastering is noobish yet
For this first song i wanted to see about my music ideas and sounds if are good, i guess everything else come with experience
That is my first song and i made every sound by my own using reason, maybe im not so pro for that after all and i should have use more ready loops and pre-set sounds created by professionals.
So what i understand is that
- I have to give more attention to the beat and make it more interesting
- Make better bridges and changes inside the song so i will prepare the dancer about what is going to come for him to dance
- some vocals in the piano session might make the song more interesting
- and of course my mastering is noobish yet
For this first song i wanted to see about my music ideas and sounds if are good, i guess everything else come with experience