My first song (movede here)

[Alfonso Del Rikardo]

Hello. This is my first recorded song.
Mic is yanmai 777 usb
Guitar Harley Benton (prs copy)
Bass Harley Benton (les paul copy)
Amp Behringer thunderbird 108
Drums were made in fl studio

Hope to hear your insides on what is good and what not. Feel free to say anything, as long as you think it's usefull.

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[Trichter]

Sounds nice!
Reminds me of the band Rotor (instrumental stoner rock) from Berlin.

 

[Alfonso Del Rikardo]

Sounds nice!
Reminds me of the band Rotor (instrumental stoner rock) from Berlin.

Oh, I'm glad because it's supposed to be stoner rock

 

[Monkey Allen]

Sounds like a Smashing Pumpkins demo. It's all good. I would say that the song doesn't really go anywhere though for a long time. A minute and a half in and nothing much develops. Will it have a vocal, or is it instrumental?

 

[Alfonso Del Rikardo]

It is

Sounds like a Smashing Pumpkins demo. It's all good. I would say that the song doesn't really go anywhere though for a long time. A minute and a half in and nothing much develops. Will it have a vocal, or is it instrumental?

It is made to be a quick show opener. Titled Dobro veče (eng good evening) it's just a little something to begin with

 

[dobro]

The cymbal crashes are too forward, right?

 

[Alfonso Del Rikardo]

The cymbal crashes are too forward, right?

I have to change voume on drum parts. Do they sound too generic?