my first all criticism welcomed

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This is my first audio I actually mixed and recorded. Its not done yet, its just guitar and drum tracks but I did it with my motherboard soundcard(I have a soundblaster live but its seems to have alot of delay so I cant use it) and I dont have real monitors so I have worked with what I have. I know the quality is kinda weak and the levels a little bit sloppy but not actually sure whats wrong.( I can also tell the timing is a little off...but I can fix that later)So please dont hold back and tell me what I can do to fix it. Don't worry I wont be offended so say anything you think is wrong or I can do to fix it so far. Thanks.

 
HAHA OPPS I didnt think anyone would respond that fast and I forgot to post the song so I had to upload it and then I was ganna edit the post haha sorry
thanks for responding fast atleast. Ok well the link is in the first post now
 
xtjdx said:
It's way too quiet.
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Nah. Just not at the -0.2db everyone's used to. This works well.

You might back the marching snare down a bit. The guitar on the right can use some gain. And, the part starting around 2:00 is overcompressed (unless that's what you're going for). Keep up the strong work.
 
Awsome thanks.I can fix that stuff, I'm sure there is more wrong if anyone can think of anything.
 
aaroncomp said:
Nah. Just not at the -0.2db everyone's used to. This works well.

You might back the marching snare down a bit. The guitar on the right can use some gain. And, the part starting around 2:00 is overcompressed (unless that's what you're going for). Keep up the strong work.
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He was remarking like I did, that the link wasn't there.
 
Rokket said:
He was remarking like I did, that the link wasn't there.
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If someone doesn't read the thread, it's not worth explaining.
 
xtjdx said:
If someone doesn't read the thread, it's not worth explaining.
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Yep.

I just listened to the song. I can't offer any more hints than was already given. Nice tune, though. Keep up the good work!
 
Rokket said:
He was remarking like I did, that the link wasn't there.
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He was?

Yeah that snare's annoying. The crash is too. Try bringing them down a bit. WHOA! Got really sloppy at 2:40 something. Try to tightin it up some. :D


Sounds familar. Can't put my finger on it. Not really that bad for your first.

L8er,
livilaNic
 
bringing the volumes of the crashes and the snare down? or should i change them somehow
 
Again, I would bring them down a little. I find the patterns fresh sounding, and not "annoying." As always, personal tastes.
 
Ok. Thanks guys I apreciate all the help so far, It all helps(hehe even saying i suck at this which fortunately for me no one has :D .)
 
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