I'm not looking at any freq. analysis or any other BS, but it does sound like it was run thru a low pass filter...or shelved off at 8k fairly drastically.
I'd like to hear a better separation between things...especially the drums and the vocals...they seem to occupy the same space and panorama a lot of the times....right down the middle. The drums do have some action off to the sides, but for some reason seem to take up the middle alley by far the most.
The quieter parts are very nice, and "open up" much more, and are more musical to me as well.
I don't understand the digeroo and the laughing at the end...but, that's not important.
The mix also has a very *dry* sound to it...kinda like it was recorded in a padded cell

I think that since there is no ambiance at all (or at least none that I could hear) takes away any front to back balance in the mix, and that is what this mix seems to suffer the most from. I like to hear a "space"...even if very subtle, and I struggle to hear one here.... personal preference, I suppose.
I understand no EQ with tracking...but not sure I agree with keeping things flat all the way thru...just for the sake of it...or whatever reason. Maybe you have the hearing of a dog, and that's why you keep things dialed back!! But, if it sounds good to you, and other stuff seems "hyped" in the high end...maybe you have a reason, but I'd look towards your monitoring situation with a keener eye.
Nice tune, great playing, btw.
thanks for posting some updates...