Hey DJ,
Pull up a chair & listen to a few tracks, offer some comments, some praise, some recommendations some perspective and then people will have a chance to become acquainted with you. They may then be glad to listen & offer suggestions.
I'll take a punt on the assumption that you'll PARTICIPATE.
No bottom end.
Too much in the jacked up high area.
There isn't too much difference between the "radio" intro & the rest of the song except volume.
It's agood performance & song but you've got to mix without headphones.
There's only a hint of bass guitar - some definition in the high mids to suggest it's there at all.
The bass drum is present but in a small way & with no power.
This song - with its Sabbath style riff & roll - needs to hit the chest with some power.
From 4.28 on there's heaps of clipping/distortion/excess volume - you had the song too hot through the body 7 left no room for the vroom to the end.
You should credit the performer, composer, producer as well as offering the title. Provinence is everything.