Echo/verb wouldn't help much, since you got some bad takes, and that's like pollishing a turd. You need more condensor mics, and you got too many sm57's

If you can retrack, do it. Try 2 mics on the guitar cab, just to see what you can get. The toms are not that important. Point the snare mic more at an angle, so that it catches sounds from a larger surface.
You got zip chance to improve you cymbal sound if you keep using SM57's.
Loose the 58 on the vocals, and make him sing it again, but straight into the condensor BUT with a pop shield. Pointing a mic off axis works against plosif sounds but also takes away alot of treble, aspecially when using a dynamic like a 58, which already doesn't have that much upper-treble, and is mainly used for close micing (and since you said you pointed it off axis already means it's not completely close miced). Try the condensor thing. If that doesn't work/isn't possible, try just giving him the 58 (fuck the plosifs, you can filter some out).
Bassdrum can't get much better. You got the right technique there, but the mic isn't that usefull for kicks. Again, get condensors

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