Mixing Question also Master

[Esspro]

Ok its just a 128kbps stream off soundclick but you get the idea... need comments on the mix, master, possible improvements (necessary ones not personal taste ones) if any.

Thanks

Track is called "Strings Of Time" on my soundclick page....

www.soundclick.com/essprobeats

thanks for ya time

I'm monitoring on some alesis m1 active mk2s but the low end is shit, so i got a sub attached for reference but it aint a monitoring sub so i need to know if im gettin the low end ok?

 

[Blue Bear Sound]

This belongs in the MP3 clinic......... oh wait -- you posted it there too!

FYI - posting once in the appropriate forum is more than enough for people to see it........

 

[Esspro]

got no feed anywhere anyway...

 

[Blue Bear Sound]

You only posted it this morning....... you expect "instant response"???????????

 

[Esspro]

no feed anywhere for days, THANKS GUYS!

 

[Blue Bear Sound]

Here's a quickie review......

The clip didn't do a thing for me... and that persistent string pad you've got there sounds like a bad accordion sample - especially at the beginning.... I instantly thought "WTF... accordion?"

Low-end does seem "off" compared to other songs in the genre........

 

[xfinsterx]

With reguards to the sounds they sound a little dated.(mostly the drums)
they sound very early 16bit sounding.

As far as the melody and the gong and chimes.
I liked it. it seemed to lack in the low end department as far as the kick is concerned.Compositionally speaking... Nice work. Next time post up in the mp3 clinic.