You're not a drummer, are you? Take the drum track first. If it is stereo tune out those highs, pull them way back. My guess is you mixed this all at once and your ears were fried for the highs so you overcompensated. Look at the eq on those tracks. My guess is you'll see you turned the highs up. either your speakers are weak in the high frequencies or you tried to make the drum track punchy and it overdid the hi-hats. If the drums are on separate tracks, pitch the hats down until they don't wipe out all that great guitar work in the intro. Why did you take out the bass? When was the last time you heard a band like this play without a bass? My guess is it was the bass line, not the sound. Rethink that decision and either bring in a bass player and let them come up with a good bass line or work until you get something that works. On first blanch I would say just pump the bass on the low root note. Good luck.
Rod Norman