Hey, try and get your stuff on NoWhereRadio, you can post covers (it took me five minutes to start d/ling on Lycos...)
I like this song, always have. You've done a great job with it, here's what I'd do to improve on it...
@ 0:16, add a second guitar track (regular 6 string) using the root chords and put it far right. If you don't wanna go back and retrack the guitar, then take the first guitar part you have, copy it in your DAW (or copy it to another track on your multitrack), delay it some 5-10 ms (that's a guess) and EQ it so you get less treble, more bass. Again, throw it all the way to the right and efx to taste. The mix as I hear it is too "left," and a second acoustic will help beef up the mix, too. Hey, you can always take the guitar you've got and pan it center (or just off-center), but the two-guitar thing is magical. You'll dig it.
The baritone "bomp bomp" at the end sounds out of place without any "bomp bomp" throughout the song. You might add a vocal bass line to the song, or eliminate the "bomp bomp," but it sounds... a bit off the way it is.
Cool. I think it sounds really good!