OK I'm listening...
My first point will be about reverb. There is a lot a reverb. Too much for me. Of course it'S MY own opinion, so...ya know, it's not really important.
And, I feel like there is too much compression. I may be wrong, but I kind of feel the compressors pumping (dunno if its the way to say this in english) but, this could be du to the mp3 encoding.
Ok I just listen it again and I 'm pretty sure it's the mp3 thing..
Maybe you shoul try to add so low end, to the snare (lets say 2 or 3 db around 120hz) and the kick need some too (3 db @ 80hz)
...sounds like the acc. guitar stings were old, am I wrong?
I would try to give them a 1 or 2 db around 3600hz and 6000hz.
The guitars is not bad to my ears, but they certainely can handle a bit more presence. Maybe cutting the reverb will bring them front and the EQ I suggest wont be necessairy.
