Metal song!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

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I loved the one Vocal that went AOOOORRRGGGGG. I was disappointed when no more vocals popped up. The snare sounds like a metronome or something. Just doesn't work at all. It just needs a better mix and more vocals. It doesn't sound thought out or arranged to me like the others have been saying. Maybe I'm missing something, but it's a good foundation. I can see myself liking it and I'm a person who listens to extreme metal day in and day out (along with all kinds of other types of music).

Thanks mate. I will add vocals (Growl. I have a lot of lyrics to put in this song) and do a better mix with real drums (better snare) added, pretty soon. Still waiting for some equipment. Hopefully you will like the song a little bit more when that is done. I'll try to give you a note when its out, if you're interessed.

I'm by the way new to mixing and stuff like that.

Cheers for the feedback!

Mads
 
It's cool. I'm not insulting it in anyway. You're off to a good start!
 
Without reading everyone's comments (sorry if I repeat someone). Guitar throughout has a little too much gain for my taste. It makes the definition on your lead passages to get lost in the fizz. My problem with the drums is that the cymbals are too loud, the snare has too much reverb and is too high pitched. The bass needs something as well, possibly more drive, as well as some boost in the low mid and pulling out some upper mid. Just my .02

Overall composition was cool. I did enjoy that you double tracked guitar on the big stuff and you absolutely have the right idea on arranging. I also read that these drums are temporary, so I would like to hear the updated version! :)
 
Without reading everyone's comments (sorry if I repeat someone). Guitar throughout has a little too much gain for my taste. It makes the definition on your lead passages to get lost in the fizz. My problem with the drums is that the cymbals are too loud, the snare has too much reverb and is too high pitched. The bass needs something as well, possibly more drive, as well as some boost in the low mid and pulling out some upper mid. Just my .02

Overall composition was cool. I did enjoy that you double tracked guitar on the big stuff and you absolutely have the right idea on arranging. I also read that these drums are temporary, so I would like to hear the updated version! :)

Hey, thanks for the feedback. I will fix these things and re-record the drums pretty soon, so I'll try to give you a note when I've re-recorded it! Glad you liked it. :)
 
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