I listened to both mixes.
To me the right level for the drums is somewhere in between the two. The drums are too low in the first mix, and too loud in the second.
The guitars in the second mix seem a little bit brighter. I liked that a bit more. I thought the main rhythm guitars were a little cloudy and had just a bit too much gain dialed.
I think the lead guitar should come up a little bit. It's pretty low in the mix. Except for the section shortly after the 2 min mark. It was at a good level there.
The bass had a little bit of a sterile tone. Not enough midrange. Mostly low end and clicky/twangy attack on the upper end.
This are mostly minor complaints, it's not too bad.
Good tight doubled guitars.