First let me say that this is not really my genre, so take these comments with a grain of salt.
I think the groove is cool in general, and there are nice little bits of ear candy sprinkled throughout (fuzz guitars, etc.). The two big detractors to me are:
1. Lack of power in the low end: The bass and drums sound a little lightweight to me and prevent the track from having the impact it should, IMO.
2. Tremolo on the vocals: This effect gets old pretty quickly, again IMO, and wears out its welcome. I would think it would be better suited for just a small section to make it count.
Other than that, I think it sounds good.