Manslick teaches songwriting

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So when I woke up today I ate at O'Dollys.
I had an egg and sausage sandwich
The entire time I want to beat on drums and play guitar
I had to be cordial and not a buzzer although that is what I wanted to do
So then I cut up limbs and raked leaves and made a polite place to sing in which I will watch a fire go to sleep
I had to meet my money man later so before all that I showered and watched YT space videos
My sweet and I went out the ML and just beat the hard ass rain
Money man says we're cool so we went to TRH
Lovely place. So many young kids.
Left there and stopped at a beer depot where I used to get a 12 for 10.53.
Now it is 14.99 and all can think about is fourths and rhythm.
No matter how loud the dude in the white truck has his sub sonic rock breaking beat beating - I'm still on a mission
She loves me
I say - sweet I need to be in my room.
She has to admonish me and I know it worries her, because I'm a lost cause, but I said I Do


So I went home and did the below song


And Now I share some thoughts about it

go with it
get a riff
keep going
over and over

this is not something you can drive by
you have to commit to the time

over and over
over and over
over and over

don't judge - keep going
but you got to have a riff
how?

well tap your foot
kick a brick
helps if you play a harmonica
hold a human and feel the groove

you have to invest your whole entire being
no matter what you think
if your groove counts, in terms of time
then it will resonate with all of us

hits? R&R HOF
I was thrown out of there because I thought it was a strip joint
Oh I'm gonna get there. I have to roll down a hill.



 
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Seems to me to have sort of a Tom Waits vibe. I like it.
 
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