Making progress on a song..

[Solaris79]

Just posted a quick little snippet of a song I'm working on. I always write a song almost like the way a painter paints... I get a scene in my head and I start to develop it in a musical sense.

www.myspace.com/solaris79
snippet is "Paper Dragon"

What I'd like to know is just within the small clip I have posted, what imagery comes to mind for you, the listener.

I'm doing this as an exercise to try and make a serious move towards writing for soundtracks, and I want to just take a quick pulse of what I'm doing.

Thanks!

 

[IsmaelTapiaII]

I'm seeing nighttime rain scenes. In slow motion. With dramatic lighting and poses. The climax of the movie, maybe?