Lyric suggestions please

[Detector]

Here is a tune I heard in my head and put to music. I used drum tracks but the rest is my doing so I can change them as needed. I used Audacity so I have the individual tracks as well. I'm trying to think of some ideas for lyrics. What comes to mind when you hear this tune? Rock balled? Ideas?

Thanks

[MP3]http://detectorplace.com/music/Inprog/Im-Moving-On.mp3[/MP3]

 

[Rocket2112]

I'd like to see you in the morning light
I like to feel you when it comes to the night
Now I'm here and I'm all alone
Still I know how it feels, I'm alone again

Tried so hard to make you see
But I couldn't find the words
Now the tears, they fall like rain
I'm alone again without you

Alone again without you
Alone again without you

I said, "Stay", but you turned away
Tried to say that it was me
Now I'm here and I've lost my way

Now I know how it feels, I'm alone again

Tried so hard to make you see
But I couldn't find the words
Now the tears, they fall like rain
I'm alone again without you

Alone again without you
Alone again without you
Alone again without you

I tried so hard to make you see
But I couldn't find the words
Now the tears, they fall like rain
I'm alone again without you

Alone again without you
Alone again, alone again
Alone again without you


Or just check out Dokken's "Alone Again" on Youtube.

 

[Detector]

Well crap! Too much similarity for my taste. Back to the studio.

 

[Rocket2112]

Keep at it! Persistence will pay off.