Looking for feedback for instrumental soft rock compositions

[StoneJack]

Hi I all, looking for a feedback to two instrumental rock compositions,
recorded on Deviser electric guitar, Mac, Creative USB sound card, Logic Pro and Garageband.
I also made the image videos, using Pexels free video, in Final Cut Pro.

rock ballad type


Soft rock melody

 

[Papanate]

Hi I all, looking for a feedback to two instrumental rock compositions,
recorded on Deviser electric guitar, Mac, Creative USB sound card, Logic Pro and Garageband.
I also made the image videos, using Pexels free video, in Final Cut Pro.

rock ballad type


Soft rock melody

Just off the top of head - the effects on the guitar are too much. It blurs out the themes.

 

[StoneJack]

Just off the top of head - the effects on the guitar are too much. It blurs out the themes.

Thanks! I'll definitely consider reducing plugins on the guitar track

 

[StoneJack]

Hi this is fast rock composition

Any feedback is welcomed.
Recorded using Deviser guitar, Logic Pro X with Focusrite Scarlett Solo.

 

[Papanate]

Your timing is off - and the effects on the guitar are way too much.

 

[StoneJack]

thank you! I actually turned off the plugin, its a stock Logic Pro X amp, without additional effects.

 

[StoneJack]

Hip hop style instrumental melody

 

[Mickster]

Hey....nice work!! It's begging for a complimentary hip hop vocal track.

Mick

 

[StoneJack]

Hey....nice work!! It's begging for a complimentary hip hop vocal track.

Mick

Thanks a lot