listen and tell me how to make it better

[rufiochris182]

http://bellerophonmusic.tripod.com/music/id13.html

 

[pdlstl]

For starters, the mix clips almost all the way through, at least for me.

Also, both guitar and vocals sound completely dry.

Try doing a quick mix with a little less signal and sweeten it up with a little 'verb.

Earl

 

[rufiochris182]

ok