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I'm running out of thread titles........sorry. 
Anyway, this is a song about how much I hate winter and long for the dog days of summer, even though it is summer. Just pretend I wrote this in a few months.

This is what became of the 30 clip I posted in the "Who am I ripping off" thread about a week ago. https://homerecording.com/bbs/gener...c/who-am-i-ripping-off-36-second-clip-346341/
Here's the "finished" version: DOG'S DAY
Any thoughts on the mix and anything else that would make it better are always appreciated.
Thanx
LYRICS: (with stupid commentary....I was bored)
Dog's Day (words and music by RAMI)
Summer's gone and the moon's all the rage............. (More night than day in the winter)
Every night is getting longer.................................. (That again)
Shiver in the hall .................................................. (It's even cold in the fucking house)
Whispers in the walls............................................. (The wind is some spooky ass shit)
I've give it all for a dog's day....................................(I wish it was fucking summer)
I should have known it was destined to fall.................. (Summer's over......."fall", get it?)
Autumn made it so much clearer ..................................("autumn", get it?)
You come on way too strong........................................ (fucking winter)
And then you stay too long...........................................(fuck off winter)
My mind belongs to a dog's day.....................................(I really wish it was fucking summer)
Chorus:
A bad time to be breaking down............ (Canadian drivers, you know what I'm saying)
A bad place for a fall .............................(Canadian walkers, you know what I'm saying)
My heart's hard as the frozen ground ..................... (I hate this shit)
And I'd give it all away for a dog's day......................(I wish it was god damn summer)
I can't recall how I feel when I smile................................. (This weather pisses me off)
Pictures in my head are fading............................................(I've forgotten what summer feels like)
Go back from where you came........................................... (fuck off winter)
I much prefer the rain........................................................(what it says)
I'll take the pain of a dog's day..................................(The worst summer day is still better than winter)
Chorus:
A bad time to be breaking down (see 1st chorus)
A bad place for a fall
My heart's harder than frozen ground
And I'd give it all away for a dog's day
Tis the season when everything glitters but nothing's shining................ (Xmas fucking sucks)
So turn the page on Indian summer.................................................. (party's over homey)
You come on way too strong........................................................ (see 1st verse)
You always stay too long..............................................................(same)
But my heart belongs to a dog's day............................................ (same)
Chorus: (etc.......)
A bad time to be breaking down
A bad place for a fell
I'm so tired of the frozen ground
So I'll give it all away for a dog's day

Anyway, this is a song about how much I hate winter and long for the dog days of summer, even though it is summer. Just pretend I wrote this in a few months.


This is what became of the 30 clip I posted in the "Who am I ripping off" thread about a week ago. https://homerecording.com/bbs/gener...c/who-am-i-ripping-off-36-second-clip-346341/
Here's the "finished" version: DOG'S DAY
Any thoughts on the mix and anything else that would make it better are always appreciated.
Thanx
LYRICS: (with stupid commentary....I was bored)
Dog's Day (words and music by RAMI)
Summer's gone and the moon's all the rage............. (More night than day in the winter)
Every night is getting longer.................................. (That again)
Shiver in the hall .................................................. (It's even cold in the fucking house)
Whispers in the walls............................................. (The wind is some spooky ass shit)
I've give it all for a dog's day....................................(I wish it was fucking summer)
I should have known it was destined to fall.................. (Summer's over......."fall", get it?)
Autumn made it so much clearer ..................................("autumn", get it?)
You come on way too strong........................................ (fucking winter)
And then you stay too long...........................................(fuck off winter)
My mind belongs to a dog's day.....................................(I really wish it was fucking summer)
Chorus:
A bad time to be breaking down............ (Canadian drivers, you know what I'm saying)
A bad place for a fall .............................(Canadian walkers, you know what I'm saying)
My heart's hard as the frozen ground ..................... (I hate this shit)
And I'd give it all away for a dog's day......................(I wish it was god damn summer)
I can't recall how I feel when I smile................................. (This weather pisses me off)
Pictures in my head are fading............................................(I've forgotten what summer feels like)
Go back from where you came........................................... (fuck off winter)
I much prefer the rain........................................................(what it says)
I'll take the pain of a dog's day..................................(The worst summer day is still better than winter)
Chorus:
A bad time to be breaking down (see 1st chorus)
A bad place for a fall
My heart's harder than frozen ground
And I'd give it all away for a dog's day
Tis the season when everything glitters but nothing's shining................ (Xmas fucking sucks)
So turn the page on Indian summer.................................................. (party's over homey)
You come on way too strong........................................................ (see 1st verse)
You always stay too long..............................................................(same)
But my heart belongs to a dog's day............................................ (same)
Chorus: (etc.......)
A bad time to be breaking down
A bad place for a fell
I'm so tired of the frozen ground
So I'll give it all away for a dog's day
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