rushfan33,
Hey dude,
Welcome to the board.
Checked out your tune and I like it alot. Great vox, solid playing, strong writing and a close to done mix.
My ear says you should lower the bass (maybe tighten it up with eq?) and push the vox up some.
I'd up the git on the left in the intro and soft sections to match the git on the right. Maybe some sustained texture notes from the lead git during the intro.
During the chorus "it's a find day for lemonaid" I think the song could use more of a crunch and punch. Perhaps it is a matter of pushing the rhythm gits up and adding a more aggressive backing vox on top of everything else. Maybe some glittery distortion on the gits........something to give that part more balls and seperation.
Really liked the tune, sung with good delivery and good tracking. Is this all you?
Thanks for posting this tune.
Peace,
Theron.