I've listened to your stuff before, and thought there were some good elements in your songs....and a couple of issues that were ...just ok
this song...the synth stuff is really great. I like it a lot, and it is right up my alley of what I like also. The clear gtr playing, however is kinda lacking. The playing is kinda stiff and lacks some good feel to it. It is also a bit biting sounding, and the runs don't seem smooth when you play them. The intro was getting a bit long, until things kick in around the 3 min mark. Then the tune takes off, including a MUCH better performance on guitar. Maybe you are just happier with overdriven sounds. ...or more comfortable. The crunch chords...I like their sound, and some good note choices on the leads. Some nice stereo spreads here and there with the percussion too.
Now...after listening for 5 mins...I am wondering how this is all supposed to "connect" together...or is it just an A-->B form kinda song...synthy stuff at the beginning, and jamming soloing at the end? I suppose that is ok, but I think some song formatting would bump your stuff up tremendously. Or...some playing that would musically knock your socks off. This is good, but compared to the killer guitar instrumentals, you need something to put you in their ranks to survive...if that is important or not...but I just use it as a comparision. Otherwise, it is just jamming....to a {smallish} degree. Watch the fade at the end too...pretty abrupt.