Just want some brutal honesty

[Schmange]

I've been experimenting with 'TV/Film' soundtrack stuff recently and just wanted to get some feedback on what people think.

I still have the masters so I can redo them from scratch if necessary....
I just need some advice on ways to improve these...

Any and all advice is greatly appreciated.

http://s93744050.onlinehome.us/SchmangeOnline/SchmangeSoundtracks.htm

(the soundtrack stuff is 1/4 way down the page.

Thanks!

 

[Blue Bear Sound]

I listened to a couple of clips....... a couple of points:

- The drums sound VERY canned - lifeless and stiff.... I've heard this same kind of thing on TV ads (for music tucked under a voice-over), so maybe it's not an issue for your intended market, but from a musical/sound perspective it would need improvement, IMO....

- The sound quality is a bit strange... it sounded like you've got some sort of filter over the upper mids and top-end - as if someone threw a blanket over your song. At first I thought it was a lo-res MP3, but then noticed it was 320kbps!