just need some quick feedback on this song, please

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I understand you mean well... and I do appreciate the feedback. Some people can't take harsh criticism, but I mean, if you're right, you're right. So I thank all of you for it.
 
Mike,

I listened to the last one...

MUCH MUCH better. Better guitar tones. The drums have better definition by comparison. Vocal stands out. It's a much more polished version.

The corrections made the difference between a "B" mix and an "A" grade.

Good job.

K
 
Good tune. Thought it might benefit from some harmony in places - also the ending's great, original and a pity you don't experiment with using it more in the song. Can't comment on the mix, still learning.
 
harmonies don't fit in the song... try it... if they do, tell me I will add them!
 
ok I've sucessfully managed to butcher your chorus as I can't sing but I've got a 141K mp3 example of what I was roughly trying to get at. How's your imagination(and do you want to hear it)?
 
I like it.

Sorta, like a retro rock with some punk. Anyway, I think the cymbals get lost in the music. However, I don't think the guitar is too much for the song.
 
ok it's here

http://www.stavencrown.com/homerecording

I can only apologise for the murder of your chorus, and the audacity as it is your song so you know how you want it to sound, but show's I like it(well not judging by what I've done to it but you get me)...
 
I can't hear it very well... and I'm trying to figure out what it is... it sounds like maybe the first note was harmonized and the rest was just doubled an octave up? Am I correct? I've experimented with several harmonies around that area and so far none have fit the mood of the song. Maybe post a clip with your vocal louder? I appreciate this, thanks.
 
that's exactly right - I realised as I tried out the harmony in my head it didn't really work so I've almost just doubled it an octave up. I'm in two minds now whether it works at all as my voice is quite poor - reckon you've got the right tone for it(or use the vocalist you use in the end harmony of the song). Still I've upped the volume for you.
 
Mix vocals in better. Bring cymbals and hats down especially cymbals. Not that fond of the guitar sound. I like the solo. Nice touch.
Overall not bad mix.
 
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