ollie99
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short demo of a song I'm working on. feel free to comment, but be aware that I haven't done any of the lead stuff or mixed it that much.
Work in Progress - YouTube
Work in Progress - YouTube
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WFVoiceover
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Hello Ollie
Not bad at all from a composition perspective.
Would have to wait until the engineers commented on it, but I would like to hear the lead and bass brought forward and given a bit more presence as they sound a bit dead in some areas.
Good effort. I like it.
I know what I am about to show is not really your genre, but listen to how the track is built and learn from it.
It's a busy song like yours....but listen to how much life and "anger" is allowed to build and then run riot albeit in a controlled fashion.
Foo Fighters - The Pretender - YouTube
Not bad at all from a composition perspective.
Would have to wait until the engineers commented on it, but I would like to hear the lead and bass brought forward and given a bit more presence as they sound a bit dead in some areas.
Good effort. I like it.
I know what I am about to show is not really your genre, but listen to how the track is built and learn from it.
It's a busy song like yours....but listen to how much life and "anger" is allowed to build and then run riot albeit in a controlled fashion.
Foo Fighters - The Pretender - YouTube
ollie99
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yeah I agree, but as I said it is nowhere near completion so hopefully what you said will be addressed
DUDE FOO FIGHTERS FUCKING ROCK! As you can see I do like them
My favourite band is avenged sevenfold and other than that my music taste is mostly not as heavy as that, apart from a few songs by slipknot, system of a down and other various bands similar to them
ollie99
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thanks for listening though!
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Greg_L
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Is this the new amp? I won't comment too much becasue you say you're still working on it. Work on the drums though. The kick is pretty weak.
ollie99
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no it's not, probably the last thing I'll record on the mg50fx, the solo stuff in this will be on the new though
yeah no all I did was put some samples in just in this section quickly for the purpose of putting it up. Other than that do you mean the drum sounds or the drum playing?