Very nice guitar playing.
The vocal delivery didn't set well with me, though...
Technically, you have a very nice tone to your voice.
But that vibrato and the way you hesitated to say certain lines didn't work well for the tune.
The mic sounded great...Alan Hyatt makes a nice product.
This was well-recorded, well-played.
Would try it again with a different vocal delivery, and i think you will have nailed it.
VI