Serendipity Records
Well-known member
Kinda bluesy; fuzzy guitar, e-piano, B3, drums, bass. Composition basically finished, want to hear your thoughts on the lyrics before I record them
Verse 1
That morning star ain’t my lucky star
Shining bright, it’s cold and far
Another night of oblivion
Shatters, I wake to hallucination
Chorus
This life of mine is a living death
And spinning in circles I run out of breath
Without you I’m purposeless
A vicious cycle that I cannot redress
Verse 2
Days on end go by
And I know, I don’t come to your mind
But (insert affectionate term here), not an hour goes by
That I your vision find
(instrumental solos etc)
Verse 3
Well you can’t keep a good man down
I’ll run the world over to give you that crown
And if I can’t, for hell I’ll be bound
I won’t let you down
Chorus
This life of mine is a living death
And spinning in circles I run out of breath
Without you I’m purposeless
A vicious cycle that I cannot redress
Verse 1
That morning star ain’t my lucky star
Shining bright, it’s cold and far
Another night of oblivion
Shatters, I wake to hallucination
Chorus
This life of mine is a living death
And spinning in circles I run out of breath
Without you I’m purposeless
A vicious cycle that I cannot redress
Verse 2
Days on end go by
And I know, I don’t come to your mind
But (insert affectionate term here), not an hour goes by
That I your vision find
(instrumental solos etc)
Verse 3
Well you can’t keep a good man down
I’ll run the world over to give you that crown
And if I can’t, for hell I’ll be bound
I won’t let you down
Chorus
This life of mine is a living death
And spinning in circles I run out of breath
Without you I’m purposeless
A vicious cycle that I cannot redress
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