Is this song any good?

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It sounds like, despite being told already elsewhere to post these things in the MP3 clinic, you continue to post them in the wrong forum....

It sounds like you're not listening...
 
It sounds like, despite being told already elsewhere to post these things in the MP3 clinic, you continue to post them in the wrong forum....

It sounds like you're not listening...

Yup, thanks Arm... and sorry, gotta move this one too.

Xela, please post your tunes in the MP3 clinic.
 
Oh, sorry. my bad. It won't happen again. I'm still pretty new to this whole "internet" thing. heh.
 
You've got a lot of potential - you're a really good musician, keep at it. Get a windguard.
 
I really digged the intro, however the vocal's composition and performance was a bit of a let down
 
I appreciate that it started pretty quietly since I left my volume WAY up last night. :D

The piano sounds good.

I don't know that your vocal tone is a good match for it though. You've kind of got that nasal, teen angst sound vs. the smooth, mellow piano sound.

They drums are completely buried; they might as well not be there if they're that quiet.

The song overall is good, but it's probably a solid 3 minutes longer than it needs to be.
 
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