Armistice Son of Yoda Dec 20, 2010 #2 It sounds like, despite being told already elsewhere to post these things in the MP3 clinic, you continue to post them in the wrong forum.... It sounds like you're not listening...
It sounds like, despite being told already elsewhere to post these things in the MP3 clinic, you continue to post them in the wrong forum.... It sounds like you're not listening...
Chili Site Moderator Dec 21, 2010 #3 Armistice said: It sounds like, despite being told already elsewhere to post these things in the MP3 clinic, you continue to post them in the wrong forum.... It sounds like you're not listening... Click to expand... Yup, thanks Arm... and sorry, gotta move this one too. Xela, please post your tunes in the MP3 clinic.
Armistice said: It sounds like, despite being told already elsewhere to post these things in the MP3 clinic, you continue to post them in the wrong forum.... It sounds like you're not listening... Click to expand... Yup, thanks Arm... and sorry, gotta move this one too. Xela, please post your tunes in the MP3 clinic.
X xela526 New member Dec 21, 2010 #4 Oh, sorry. my bad. It won't happen again. I'm still pretty new to this whole "internet" thing. heh.
T timtimtim Member Dec 21, 2010 #5 You've got a lot of potential - you're a really good musician, keep at it. Get a windguard.
S StevenJacksonMu New member Dec 21, 2010 #6 A lot of potential musically....the vocals need work. YouTube - Up Above My Head
L lightsandshapes New member Dec 22, 2010 #8 I really digged the intro, however the vocal's composition and performance was a bit of a let down
VomitHatSteve Hat STYLE. Not contents. Dec 22, 2010 #9 I appreciate that it started pretty quietly since I left my volume WAY up last night. The piano sounds good. I don't know that your vocal tone is a good match for it though. You've kind of got that nasal, teen angst sound vs. the smooth, mellow piano sound. They drums are completely buried; they might as well not be there if they're that quiet. The song overall is good, but it's probably a solid 3 minutes longer than it needs to be.
I appreciate that it started pretty quietly since I left my volume WAY up last night. The piano sounds good. I don't know that your vocal tone is a good match for it though. You've kind of got that nasal, teen angst sound vs. the smooth, mellow piano sound. They drums are completely buried; they might as well not be there if they're that quiet. The song overall is good, but it's probably a solid 3 minutes longer than it needs to be.