I must admit, I downloaded this song and have jammed it a few times on the way to work! I really dig it. After listening to it a little more seriously, I will tell you that the kick needs a little more oomph!, more body to it. The guitars are a little too airy and saturated (if that makes any sense)...I would love to hear it with a little more focused bite to them! Just thought I would give a little more input after having really listened, even though obviously these points don't mean it isn't good enough to listen to!
By the way, are you a big Dream Theater fan? At times it sounds like an excerpt from "Awake"...that is a big compliment by the way!