industrial(ish) alternative song - mix critique

[gbav]

My first mix on a new song, been working on it here and there when have time. Would appreciate any advice you can give (song/mix/production). You guys have been incredible as far as help goes, been helping me alot.

the songs "straight"
at http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3452&alid=-1

Thanks alot
Gary

 

[SnakeDog5050]

Yeah I remember this tune, I like it! I've heard this before on here, that part at :56 jogged my memory. That's a really really cool part

Mixwise it sounds good on my system. Only suggestion I got is that I think it'd sound better with more bass. The song seems to lack low end, my woofers not doing too much right now.

Other than that, cool, tight, moody sounding song

 

[Dogman]

Lots of power in the drums. Good sounds. I like this sound. Not pigeon-holed to a certain genre....elements of a few things. I agree with Snake it could use a bit more bass guitar sound. Drums are good and deep, and the tune could use a bit of boost in the bass area to give it a more ominous feel. Just a personal thing, as the tune is very cool, as is.
Ed

 

[gbav]

thanks alot guys, glad you both brought up the low end. Im absolutely awful at telling exactly where im at with that. I updated the file to try and do a 30 second or less fix on that. You both have been alot of help. Thanks again

Take care
gary