I think it's outstanding. I always look forward to hearing new songs from you and this one certainly didn't disappoint! The mix sounds really great to my ears - everything is clear and in it's own space, everything is nicely balanced....excellent overall. Your songwriting, and especially your arranging, is bordering on genius
The performances are top notch too, moving through all those transitions with tempos slowing down/speeding up into and out of them. Nice how the tempos, transitions, and musical styles fit the lyrical changes as you develop the theme of the song too. I really liked the slowed down bluesy part in the middle, very cool.
I wish that we lived in a world where this type of talent and effort would be universally appreciated and commercially successful, because you'd likely be a household name if so, but you are living in the wrong time, my friend
I don't think that really matters though, because it's obvious that your are having fun making great music, and hopefully you are enjoying the end results...I know I am!!!
Very Best,
Dave DeWhitt
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