Scriabin
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Hello Everyone,
I've really appreciated the critiques youve given in the past, some humbling and some encouraging. Well here's my newest lyrics and they are for another classic jazz, dixieland type song. It needs its first good revision so spare nothing I appreciate any thoughts and critiques! Thank you in advance!
The Kiss I Never Knew
Copyright 2003 © by Zachary Hadley
(Verse 1)
Underneath the willow trees
Basked in the auburn moon
Haunted by the memories
Of the kiss I never knew.
(Verse 2)
Dreaming of your hazel eyes
Drenched by their brilliant hues
Aching for your tender lips
And the kiss I never knew.
(Chorus)
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
It wasn’t true love but then it grew
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
A desire turned nightmare, caused by you.
(Verse 3)
Drowning in my past regrets
Plagued by my thoughts of you
Wishing to have felt your lips
And the kiss I never knew.
(Chorus)
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
It wasn’t true love but then it grew
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
A desire turned nightmare, caused by you.
(Bridge)
And when you walked into my life
I had you lined up in my sights
I took aim and I fired twice
But you shot me down every time
(Chorus)
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
It wasn’t true love but then it grew
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
A desire turned nightmare, caused by you.
I've really appreciated the critiques youve given in the past, some humbling and some encouraging. Well here's my newest lyrics and they are for another classic jazz, dixieland type song. It needs its first good revision so spare nothing I appreciate any thoughts and critiques! Thank you in advance!
The Kiss I Never Knew
Copyright 2003 © by Zachary Hadley
(Verse 1)
Underneath the willow trees
Basked in the auburn moon
Haunted by the memories
Of the kiss I never knew.
(Verse 2)
Dreaming of your hazel eyes
Drenched by their brilliant hues
Aching for your tender lips
And the kiss I never knew.
(Chorus)
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
It wasn’t true love but then it grew
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
A desire turned nightmare, caused by you.
(Verse 3)
Drowning in my past regrets
Plagued by my thoughts of you
Wishing to have felt your lips
And the kiss I never knew.
(Chorus)
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
It wasn’t true love but then it grew
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
A desire turned nightmare, caused by you.
(Bridge)
And when you walked into my life
I had you lined up in my sights
I took aim and I fired twice
But you shot me down every time
(Chorus)
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
It wasn’t true love but then it grew
The kiss, the kiss I never knew
A desire turned nightmare, caused by you.