I Wanna Be Loved

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My Friends, Above is the link to a new track I've produce for this song it is all because of your feedback/comments Thanks!

I Wanna Be Loved
©2016 Irwin Abrigo

(1st verse)
First time I saw you, saw you
First time I saw you, first time , first time
First time I saw you,
saw you passing by
I suddenly got this feeling
I suddenly got this feeling
This feeling, this feeling
This special kind of feeling

(Chorus)
cause I wanna be loved
Yea I wanna be loved
I wanna be loved
I wanna be loved


(2nd verse)
Though you don't know me, know me
Though you don't, know me, Though you don't,Though you don't
Though you don't know me
I was wondering
If you felt the same way too
If you felt the same way too
this feeling, this feeling
This special kind of feeling

(Chorus)
cause I wanna be loved
Yea I wanna be loved
I wanna be loved
I wanna be loved

Come over to the house next door
Come over to the house next door
Come over to the house next door
Come over to the house next door
So I called you on the telephone
So I called you on the telephone
You got nothing to loose
You got nothing to loose

(Chorus)
cause I wanna be loved
Yea I wanna be loved
I wanna be loved
I wanna be loved


(Below is the link to the first Post/track)


This is a new song I have written and would like to hear your feedback/comments

https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/iwannabelove
 
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I see what you're trying to do and maybe it's cool (I'm old, what do I know about cool?) but the edits are killing me. When you cut a track to begin a phrase or end one, you have to do a micro fade in and fade out. Your DAW should have the ability to do a fade on the individual parts. On vocal, for example, you cut it up into sections. The very beginning and end of each section should have a means to fade in or fade out.

I use Cubase. I cut the vocal track into two parts.

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Vocal Cut 02.webp

Then I grab the volume editor flag (or whatever they call it) and draw it to the right to create a fade in.

Vocal Cut 03.webp

Do the same on the end to create a fade out. It should smooth the transition and make the edits more musical.
 
OK, I didn't get through it all. Didn't work for me either. I understand what you're trying to do, as Chilli stated, it is pretty choppy and doesn't seem to work with any kind of rhythm I could follow.
 
Chili & DM60, Thanks very much for your comments and advice on my song. I really thought I had pulled it off (Meaning) I had a big song here.
 
Irwin abrigo said:
Chili & DM60, Thanks very much for your comments and advice on my song. I really thought I had pulled it off (Meaning) I had a big song here.
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You might have, just not as it is right now. Go back and work in it, smooth it out, get the rhythm going. Don't give up just yet!
 
Yep. Big thing is to fix the horizontal clipping.

The vocals are pretty sibilant too.
 
not only are the edits harsh, but they don't even appear to be in any type of complimentary rhythm to the beat. They seem random and unpredictable. How can someone get into the beat if it's impossible to know what the beat is. I'd think this idea would be better suited to a particular passage in another song rather than as the main idea for an entire song (the way it is, anyway. with the random cuts)
 
andrushkiwt said:
not only are the edits harsh, but they don't even appear to be in any type of complimentary rhythm to the beat. They seem random and unpredictable. How can someone get into the beat if it's impossible to know what the beat is. I'd think this idea would be better suited to a particular passage in another song rather than as the main idea for an entire song (the way it is, anyway. with the random cuts)
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HI Andrushkiwt, I've found your comments very much interesting and I thank you for that. I am new to producing music/tracks and the input that you'd put into your rely to show me what would work and what wouldn't work I appreciate that very much. Please feel free to comment on any other song that I may post here.

Thanks again

Irwin
 
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To me, much better. I would still work on smoothing it out, get the glitching working better for the song. But IMO, vast improvement over before. Really taking shape.
 
Well it's a nice enough tune that doesn't really go anywhere. Kind of sounds like a demo or rehearsal.
 
Manslick said:
Well it's a nice enough tune that doesn't really go anywhere. Kind of sounds like a demo or rehearsal.
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Thank you very much Manslick for listening to my song and also for leaving a comment I appreciate it a lot.
 
DM60 said:
To me, much better. I would still work on smoothing it out, get the glitching working better for the song. But IMO, vast improvement over before. Really taking shape.
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I am working on making this song the best it can be hoping most listener would appreciate it.
 
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