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easlern
Boredom artist
BroKen_H
Re-member
[h=4]Lee Kah Shawn, there are no sounds shared on your sound cloud. How can we help?[/h]
ido1957
9K Gold Member
Work on your falsetto to smooth out your high parts.
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Robus
Well-known member
Don't we all! 
You seem to be able to control your voice when you are singing in your natural range. The falsetto needs work. Enunciation and diction were a problem. You need to put the lyrics across--this is critical in any popular genre. The audience must understand the words you are singing. The tone of your voice wasn't bad, despite the lofi recording. Get a vocal coach. Find some people who play instruments and give it a try.
You seem to be able to control your voice when you are singing in your natural range. The falsetto needs work. Enunciation and diction were a problem. You need to put the lyrics across--this is critical in any popular genre. The audience must understand the words you are singing. The tone of your voice wasn't bad, despite the lofi recording. Get a vocal coach. Find some people who play instruments and give it a try.
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ellisek
New member
i like your voice but some things you could work on are is diction,vibrato and transitioning don"t give up because progress is progress and you will see it with hard work and dedication.