I hope no one minds me doing this....

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Wow,not what I expected!

I love the way you did her voice,she's excellent!

Man,you must go to a cool church,can I come?:D
Best worship music I ever heard!

I liked the drum work,nice job!

Really enjoyed it,thanks.

Pete
 
WATYF said:
I was waitin' for someone to notice that... the toms are just dead. I wasn't happy with those at all...

So I guess the list is:

1) Take that stupid sample off the snare... EQ it with a little more "attack" and bring it up in the mix.

2) Give the bass drum some more punch and bring it up a little.

3) Give some more presense to the cymbals.

4) Do something with those nasty toms..

5) Get rid of that worthless drummer..


did I miss anything? :p
That's about all. By the way, I like it.

WATYF
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WATYF
This is real nice!
Everything I can say has been covered.

As you build this song, have someone harmonize with lead vocal.
She sings great! Perhaps multi track her voice if you can!

Nice start. Has passion!

Joel
 
POTENTIAL!!!!!!!!!

I'm feelin' this! The door is wide open for additional musical oppty's and additions. Vocs on verge of taking off!

This is a sweet 1st step and can't wait to hear the final, end result!!
 
I listened several times, and anybody can tell this is gonna' be really good. Needs more bass...sounds thin. Sorry if you've been told this already.

I can see why you couldn't wait to post this.

:D
chris
 
WATYF said:
Hey.. just for you I put a china boy in there... see if you can find it.. :D

But unlike you,... I only use it once... ;) :cool: :p

WATYF
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Ouch!

I'll have you know, I'm phasing out my china use slowly. jerk.

:D

Dude this is a great tune. She's got a very very nice voice. Or is that you? :D

This would sound fantastic with a snare.

You should post the finished project bro. It has got terrific potential.
 
I like this.

The drumming is very good (and I'm not just saying that ;) ) but as everyone has said, someone stole your snare. Go get it back.

Really nice voice too. Some odd choices for panning the vocals, though. I'm not sure it works, although I realise it's just a rough mix.

Lots of space in the mix, which I like. And the guitars don't need too much doing to them.

Very nice.

AB
 
Listening to it right now.

The song is great. Great songrwiting and playing for all instruments.

Soundwise:

Guitars could use a little compression or a bit a crunchier sound, reverb or delay maybe. Kinda lacking of sustain.

As for the drums, you are a truly gifted drummer, but the sound is a bit tiny, lacks punch in the bd, snare and toms.

Maybe it's because I'm hearing in tiny comp speakers at work...

Keep it up, bro!

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Sorry.. had to take the song down. I think most everyone had a listen. If not, PM me. Thanks for the comments.

WATYF
 
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