I have a new song! "On The Edge"

  • Thread starter Thread starter Basick Musick
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Ruffcut said:
HOMEY I DUN LIKE THE RAPPIN HOW MUCH SIMPLER CAN IT GET SHIT! lmao. i cant give constructive cuz id say to get beter at rapin but then again is ur style. u might be good at what u do i just wudnt be come a fan cuz im not feeling the vocalists except for that hook but the rapers is mediocre.
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Two 'p's. Rapper has two 'p's! You're saying something completely different than what you intend! :D

Basick, I like this one better than your last song. The vocals on the hook sound a lot better; they've settled more into the gravelly side of things, so that's good. It actually sounds a lot like DMX, I think.

The verses have some sibilance issues. Your 's'es and 'f's are a little overpowering.
 
Lol @ the "Rape" reference. I honestly didn't even catch it.

And thanks man!
A Good friend of mine is a huge DMX fan, I don't listen to him much though haha.

And I did go back and add a Desser to the final version of the song,
Just haven't posted it yet haha
 
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