yeah too much high end on the kick. the track is already bright as heck with the guitars and OH's, and that snare too. it almost sounds like a HP filter is on the master at 80hz or something. oh...until the breakdown 1/4 way through comes in.
just needs some EQ'ing efforts, really. love the style and production choices here. great nits and pieces all over, id' just rework the EQ balance of everything. I'd actually listen to this while driving, for sure. I have a ton of vocal melody ideas for it too. this is really a great piece of work, needs a better mix to do it justice. nice man